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Trevor is transparent and really helpful

Sarai was absolutely amazing to work with. She helped me with my college application essays and completely elevated my writing while still keeping my voice authentic. She gave detailed, thoughtful feedback and really pushed me to go deeper in my reflections. I felt so much more confident submitting my applications because of her support. I highly recommend her to anyone needing help with college essays!

I am so grateful for the help I received with my college applications! She truly went above and beyond, not only giving me great ideas for my letters but also providing specific resources for my letters of continued interest. She even took the time to open scholarship pages and send me links to various opportunities I could take advantage of. On top of being a resource goldmine, she is an amazing reader with a sharp eye for detail, and she is a very easy person to talk to.

Angela's very sweet and supportive, and answered all my questions beyond just PIQs. I would highly recommend connecting with her!

Excellent! Within a brief time span, He's helped transform my essay into a more coherent version of what I previously was by providing valuable insights and recommendations. If you're searching for a mentor that is efficient, I would recommend Mason L.

I loved the way Skylar provided specific feedback on my UC PIQs by helping me structure my sentences. I would love to book with her again!

Mason was really really helpful! He was super patient with everything. Although my session was really last minute, he was able to help me with everything I needed. I highly recommend.

Excellent! In the brief time we had, Mason transformed essays by providing insights on what could make my essay more concise and professional, while keeping my authentic voice. Mason is an efficient and patient mentor and I would definitely recommend him for those who want to elevate their essays to stand out!

My session with Victor was truly one of the most helpful experiences I've had when it comes to essay help! He offered such clear, specific insights on how to strengthen my UC PIQs, not only structure-wise, but also in terms of flow, clarity, and content. I appreciated how honest he was throughout the session. He pointed out what worked well, what didn’t, and how to fix it without ever making me feel discouraged. He was also incredibly reassuring, and by the end of the session, I felt a lot more confident in my writing and direction! I’d definitely recommend booking with him if you want feedback that’s both supportive and constructive.

Emilie was super understanding throughout the whole session and helped me determine what direction to take with my PIQ. I greatly appreciated her guidance and also liked her insight regarding the environment found at UC Berkeley. Overall, I am very happy with my experience and would recommend to others!

I liked that he brought out emotional resonance in a lot of my PIQs.

Great reviewer of PIQs, he didn't sugarcoat anything and told me what needed to change. Very nice, and overall, the edits he left were very high quality. He seemed genuinely eager to help, which was nice. Chatting with him made writing my final draft much easier, and overall, without this, I don't think my PIQs would be anywhere near as good.

Soojan was very very helpful!! Her approach of looking over my piqs was great. She went into depth, and left comments. She first gave me feedback on the whole piq, and then went paragraph by paragraph, giving suggestions and ways to improve (or just tweak a little). She also made sure to answer any questions I had. She gave great and helpful feedback. Overall, you can tell she is passionate about helping students :)

Nathan was very good at critiquing my piqs. I liked how instead of just reading them and giving me brief commentary on it he elaborated and gave me ways to improve my writing style. He didn't belittle me he uplifted me by giving me words of encouragement as I was writing which honestly lightened my mood about college apps and my writing as a whole. So yea thank you again Nathan.

I had an excellent customer service experience with Mason. He provided valuable, constructive feedback and professional suggestions while still helping me keep the authenticity of my writing. Highly recommended!!

Emilie was very supportive and helped me clarify and make my PIQ ideas more meaningful through thoughtful feedback and questions.

So sweet and helpful when going over essays. She gave extremely detailed and positive feedback that helped me revise my writing and convey all my ideas. And she made it extremely easy to talk about personal experiences and what you are trying to get across in your essays!

She was very helpful and nice. She made sure that I understood everything that she went through. Her feedbacks are very helpful. She is very passionate about helping you write really really good essays.

Audrey was very helpful. She gave me feedback and helped me brainstorm and create ideas to better my piq. She also was clear with communication and made sure to inform me of any thing I could fix or tweak in my piq so it could flow better.

Very professional, gave great and specific advice on my essays. Overall, it was a good experience.😊

Skylar was very helpful! She went over my common app essay and helped me revise and structure my paragraphs. She was determined and I could feel her passion to help me have the best possible essay I could submit.

Angela was extremely supportive and made me feel like the story I was trying to tell was import to me! Will definitely keep on working with her throughout my college application process!

Gave a lot of valuable insight on what I can improve on my essays. As well did a good job in helping show my personality inside of them.

Eleanor did a great job helping me with my essay. She really took the time to break it down paragraph by paragraph and make it stronger. She was very kind, professional, and easy to work with. I highly recommend her.

She was very very helpful! She made sure to make me comfortable by introducing herself and then asking me about myself. Moreover, she went through each of my piqs, in depth, leaving comments. She first gave me feedback on the whole piq, and then went paragraph by paragraph, giving suggestions and ways to improve as she went. Further, even though we were running out of time, she made sure to go through all 4 my piqs, giving me VERY good and helpful feedback! Overall, very passionate and very friendly :)

She was really passionate about analysing my essay and giving insightful feedback! Plus a very friendly and welcoming individual

Mentor is very well-spoken and has very good advice.