OnNetwork Mentors Help Students Revise Essay Drafts
How Mentors Help Revise Drafts
The first draft of an essay is rarely the best. Revision is where essays become strong and memorable.
Mentors on OnNetwork guide students through each round of revision.
Why Revising Matters
Revisions:
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Improve clarity and flow
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Strengthen main ideas
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Cut out weak or repeated sentences
The Role of a Mentor
Mentors help students by:
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Giving clear feedback on drafts
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Suggesting improvements in structure and tone
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Helping polish essays for final review
Final Thoughts
Revisions turn drafts into essays that shine. With a mentor’s help, students gain confidence in their final work.
Tip: Take a short break between drafts so you see your essay with fresh eyes.
