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OnNetwork Mentors Help Students Make Essays Personal

ow Mentors Help Make Essays Personal

Some students write essays that sound formal but lack personality. Admissions officers want to see who you really are.

OnNetwork mentors encourage students to share details that make their essays more personal and authentic.

Why Personal Essays Matter

Personal essays:

  • Show your real personality

  • Make your story unique

  • Help colleges connect with you as an individual

The Role of a Mentor

Mentors guide students by:

  • Asking questions to uncover meaningful details

  • Helping avoid essays that sound too generic

  • Encouraging honesty and self-expression

Final Thoughts

Your story is personal and powerful. With a mentor’s help, you can make your essay stand out in a genuine way.

Tip: Use “I” statements to keep your essay focused on your own experiences.