OnNetwork Mentors Help Students Make Essays Personal
ow Mentors Help Make Essays Personal
Some students write essays that sound formal but lack personality. Admissions officers want to see who you really are.
OnNetwork mentors encourage students to share details that make their essays more personal and authentic.
Why Personal Essays Matter
Personal essays:
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Show your real personality
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Make your story unique
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Help colleges connect with you as an individual
The Role of a Mentor
Mentors guide students by:
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Asking questions to uncover meaningful details
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Helping avoid essays that sound too generic
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Encouraging honesty and self-expression
Final Thoughts
Your story is personal and powerful. With a mentor’s help, you can make your essay stand out in a genuine way.
Tip: Use “I” statements to keep your essay focused on your own experiences.