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OnNetwork Mentors Help Students Find Their College Essay Story

How Mentors Help You Find Your Story

Choosing what to write about can feel like the hardest part of the college essay. Many students believe they need a huge accomplishment to impress admissions officers. In truth, the best essays often come from small, personal stories that reveal character and growth.

Mentors on OnNetwork guide students to find these stories. They know what kinds of topics show personality and help students stand out.

Why Finding Your Story Matters

A great story:

  • Shows who you are beyond grades

  • Reveals values and lessons you have learned

  • Helps the admissions office connect with you on a human level

The Role of a Mentor

OnNetwork mentors help by:

  • Asking the right questions to bring out personal experiences

  • Encouraging students to explore memories and moments they overlooked

  • Helping focus on one clear, meaningful theme

Final Thoughts

Your story is what makes you different from every other applicant. With the help of a mentor, you can turn simple experiences into powerful essays that leave a lasting impression.

Tip: Write down three short memories that made you feel proud, curious, or challenged. One of them might become your essay.