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OnNetwork Mentors Help Students Reflect in Their Essays

How Mentors Help Students Reflect

A strong college essay does more than tell a story. It shows how the student grew from the experience. Reflection turns an essay into a window into character and values.

Mentors on OnNetwork encourage students to look deeper and explain what their story means.

Why Reflection Matters

Reflection in an essay:

  • Shows maturity and self-awareness

  • Helps admissions officers understand values

  • Makes the story more meaningful

The Role of a Mentor

Mentors help students by:

  • Asking reflective questions

  • Encouraging honest thoughts about lessons learned

  • Helping connect experiences to personal growth

Final Thoughts

Reflection makes essays powerful. With a mentor’s guidance, you can go beyond storytelling and show how you have grown.

Tip: End each story with “What did I learn?” and use that to build your reflection.