OnNetwork Mentors Help Students Write Strong Essay Introductions
How Mentors Help With Essay Introductions
Admissions officers read thousands of essays, and the first few sentences often decide if they keep reading with interest. A strong introduction sets the tone for the whole essay.
Mentors on OnNetwork guide students to write openings that are clear and engaging.
Why Introductions Matter
A strong introduction:
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Catches the reader’s attention
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Introduces the essay topic naturally
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Sets up the main idea without giving everything away
The Role of a Mentor
OnNetwork mentors help students by:
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Suggesting hooks that feel authentic
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Helping refine the first paragraph so it flows into the essay
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Making sure the introduction reflects the student’s personality
Final Thoughts
The first impression matters. With guidance from a mentor, students can start their essays in a way that makes admissions officers want to keep reading.
Tip: Try starting with a short memory or vivid image to draw the reader in.
