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OnNetwork Mentors Help Students Write Strong Essay Conclusions

How Mentors Help With College Essay Conclusions

Many students start their essays strong but struggle to end them well. A weak conclusion can make an otherwise great essay feel unfinished. The ending should bring your story together and leave the reader with a clear idea of who you are.

OnNetwork mentors guide students to create conclusions that are powerful and memorable.

Why the Conclusion Matters

A strong conclusion:

  • Brings the essay back to the main idea

  • Leaves the reader with one clear takeaway

  • Shows growth and reflection

The Role of a Mentor

Mentors on OnNetwork help students by:

  • Showing how to connect the ending back to the opening

  • Suggesting ways to reflect on lessons learned

  • Making sure the last sentence feels confident and clear

Final Thoughts

Every great story deserves a strong ending. With guidance from an OnNetwork mentor, you can finish your essay in a way that is both powerful and personal.

Tip: After writing your conclusion, ask yourself, “What is the one thing I want the reader to remember about me?”